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18 Jun

And now a 75-er. Maybe the next one will meet the word limit of 55.

He was 23. On the verge of a new career. He had washboard abs and a dimpled smile.

20 years later, the beer gut and double chin wobbled as he cheered on Dhoni’s men.The career was a success but the marriage was not. His dimples on the obese face made him look like a mentally defunct overgrown child.

Leaving was not an option, she thought as she texted her gym instructor the color of her lingerie.

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14 Comments

Posted by on June 18, 2009 in Uncategorized

 

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14 responses to “Choices

  1. sraikh

    June 19, 2009 at 12:30 am

    Gah.. I am depressed after reading both.

     
  2. sraikh

    June 19, 2009 at 12:41 am

    but both were good 🙂

     
  3. spamwarrior

    June 19, 2009 at 5:26 am

    Well written.

     
  4. Smita

    June 19, 2009 at 9:25 am

    lol at ur attempts to 55ers 😀 and making your own numbers in the process 😉

    The story was good…

     
  5. Ava

    June 19, 2009 at 10:31 am

    Hope you win the kalaghoda !

    This is really good.. maybe you can hone this down to 55

     
  6. IM_VI

    June 19, 2009 at 11:51 am

    What no mention about the man’s “36-26-36” secy (Afterall career was a sucess) i guess Word limit is taking its toll on the story line

     
  7. Rohit

    June 19, 2009 at 6:53 pm

    Why were both about fat people? Both insinuating fat == bad.

     
  8. Arpz

    June 19, 2009 at 6:57 pm

    good ones both of them. can hone. (my 6 er)

     
  9. Mumbai Diva

    June 19, 2009 at 7:10 pm

    HAHAHAHA
    i like

     
  10. banjo

    June 22, 2009 at 7:33 pm

    GRRRR. racist. completely racist. you hate adipose.

     
  11. spamwarrior

    June 24, 2009 at 2:04 am

    Heehee. Let’s both do one!

     
  12. Kanupriya

    June 24, 2009 at 1:03 pm

    hmmm nice one! but both on fat people?

     
  13. Ann Dee

    June 30, 2009 at 8:27 pm

    Great post. Very very practical.

    I better hit the gym asap.

     
  14. Iya

    July 10, 2009 at 12:32 am

    why is everyone talking of infidelity?

     

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