Choices

And now a 75-er. Maybe the next one will meet the word limit of 55.

He was 23. On the verge of a new career. He had washboard abs and a dimpled smile.

20 years later, the beer gut and double chin wobbled as he cheered on Dhoni’s men.The career was a success but the marriage was not. His dimples on the obese face made him look like a mentally defunct overgrown child.

Leaving was not an option, she thought as she texted her gym instructor the color of her lingerie.

~ by WSW on June 18, 2009.

14 Responses to “Choices”

  1. Gah.. I am depressed after reading both.

  2. but both were good :)

  3. Well written.

  4. lol at ur attempts to 55ers :D and making your own numbers in the process ;-)

    The story was good…

  5. Hope you win the kalaghoda !

    This is really good.. maybe you can hone this down to 55

  6. What no mention about the man’s “36-26-36″ secy (Afterall career was a sucess) i guess Word limit is taking its toll on the story line

  7. Why were both about fat people? Both insinuating fat == bad.

  8. good ones both of them. can hone. (my 6 er)

  9. HAHAHAHA
    i like

  10. GRRRR. racist. completely racist. you hate adipose.

  11. Heehee. Let’s both do one!

  12. hmmm nice one! but both on fat people?

  13. Great post. Very very practical.

    I better hit the gym asap.

  14. why is everyone talking of infidelity?

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